PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
A body sprawled on the floor, swimming in blood, staining the tiles. Eyes, wide, fixated on the ceiling. Who put all that crap up there? A strange place to store kitchen utensils. Held up by some weird wiry mesh… What was wrong with the drawer? The kitchen tools swung like a mobile, back and forwards in the breeze.
The soul hovered above the body. Bright light shone in the room.
“Ready to go?”
The angelic voice startling.
The soul scanned the corpse in a daze.
So that’s where the knife went.
“Ah, you have unfinished business.”
“Yes, why is there so much crap up there?”
Nice he got time for unfinished business. I may try that one when my time comes
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I quite liked the idea of roaming and freaking the living, I guess I have a bit of the devil in me…
Thanks N!
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I would be curious too! 😀
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Me too, the picture looked odd to me😀.
Thanks C!
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A chance to tidy everything away before departing. Seems very civilised!
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Unless they decide to throw the objects around 😀.
Thanks I!
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Dear Tanille,
Floating utensils and a dead body. Unfinished business indeed. Chilling and intriguing.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. I could see the angel roll his eyes in my head. Would have liked more words to explore 😀.
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Really evocative!
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Thanks J!
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Curiouser and curiouser… great write!
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Thanks B!
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Seems a bunch of us went that way, eh? Well, the vantage point … 😉
This was delightful in an eerie kind of way … 😉
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Must admit this week was a bit challenging. The angle of the pic was different.
Thanks N!
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I really enjoyed this, Tannille.
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Thanks Dale!
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a chilling story with a dash of dry humor. well done.
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Haha I wondered if anyone would pick up on the humour. I’m a bit odd at times 😀…
Thanks P!
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Chilling – a soul trapped forever in limbo until someone can explain the great utensil-positioning mystery 🙂 Nice one!
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We get caught up on the most pointless details sometimes 😀!
Thanks D!
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A great blend of horror and comedy! Nice one.
Here’s my story.
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Still know how the utensils got up there…
Thanks K.
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Give up all earthly queries, angel is waiting. Even if you know, nothing is going to come back.
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Good advice.
Thanks A!
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Maybe if they stored knives in the drawer and not hanging from the ceiling, she wouldn’t have to tidy up before departing into the afterlife. The last line made me chuckle. Sounds like something I might say in the same situation.
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Yeah, forget justice, it’s all about the kitchen 😀!
Thanks F
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I love the ambiguity of the unfinished business, It would seem the murder victim is less worried about her murderer than about why the kitchen utensils are in such a weird place. Nice story!
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Sometimes humans get caught up on the most inconsequential details. 😀
Thanks P!
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We certainly do!
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As always, I am amazed with the variety of ideas one picture inspires. This one is particularly conducive to “odd and creepy,” which you have done extremely well. Ghosts, sould, angels, and floating objects. Well done 🙂
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I wasn’t sure where this story was heading. But I rarely am when I write flash. The variety of ideas is fascinating.
Thanks L!
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Chuckle. Humans are human, even in death. .
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Good stuff, Tannille, a peculiar take but sounds like the angel is amenable to finishing things off before the soul moves to where it’s going.
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The spirit can’t be forced. Free will, I think.
Thanks Shrawley
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A good story with humor, Tannille. If it’s time to go the heck with unfinished business. Let someone else clean up the mess. Or, like Bill and Ted in the one movie, you could play a game with the Grim Reaper and win your life back. My son used to make me laugh by imitating the Reaper’s line, “You sunk my battleship.” 😀 — Suzanne
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Flash back – I remember Bill and Ted, excellent! I agree let others clean up the mess…
Thanks S!
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Ha! Maybe the spirit can spend eternity rearranging things around the house.
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Now there is an idea. I think it would be fun to freak humans out. But I’m a bit cheeky by nature.
Thanks K!
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Ha sounds like there is a lot of things to tidy up
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Might take a while 😀
Thanks B!
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