PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
Note: Again this week, a little stand-alone flash fiction set in my on-going story world.
Cages. You’d think they would come up with something a little more inventive after all these years. A clipped wing or something. Oh well, they can’t keep me locked up forever and when I get out, and I will, it’ll be time to blow some arses. Should be fun. Show them what an original phoenix can do. Bet these punks have only ever encouraged diluted blood, generations too young, Atlantis a mare whisper. Stuff legends are made of.
These restraints, laughable. The bars will melt like a candle with just a touch. Yeah, I know, don’t do anything stupid. But, damn it, hurry up, temper is steaming.
Dear Tanille,
The caged anger is tangible. Not sure this prisoner should ever be released. But your story should. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Everyone wants their freedom. It just depends what side of the conflict one is on. I certainly won’t want an angered fire creature out to get me, might get a bit warm 😀.
Thanks R!
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I’m guessing there’s spells binding that chicken wire. They wouldn’t do it otherwise. Right?
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They have their own special metals that can create restraints. But the mixed Phoenix are easier to keep locked up as they aren’t as powerful. But yeah more than chicken wire lol.
Thanks N!
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I love Phoenixes and this one has some serious attitude! 😀
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He does! I’m enjoying the flash fiction it’s a great way to explore characters and random events. 😀
Thanks C!
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I love the Phoenix, always a special creature.
If it can team up with a unicorn and a dragon they will make an unstoppable force!
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And just think of the babies! (Ok too much Shrek for me).
Thanks C!
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It’s their own fault, they should know by now that a cage isn’t going to stop a determined Phoenix. Whatever happens to them serves them right!
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Damn straight. All hell is going to break loose.
Thanks I!
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Love the boiling rage in this piece.
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Would be fun to write the snap.
Thanks J!
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They should have done their research before locking them in there!
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Oh well, they’ll learn the hard way!
Thanks K
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The frustration can be felt throughout.
Nice continuation …
Isadora 😎
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This one is a hot head.
Thanks I 😀
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The Legend of the Phoenix rises again 🙂
Last line of first paragraph: did you mean to type “mere” and not “mare”?
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The muse is obsessed…. 😀.
Oops typo, thanks for that!
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After rising from the ashes, what’s a little cage?
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That’s right… not a cage when he finishes with it 😀.
Thanks N!
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Love the way you’ve captured the voice! 🙂
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He is fun. I think he’s a keeper.
Thanks S!
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I wouldn’t fancy being around when he gets out!
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Oh no… would be an inferno pretty quick 😀.
Thanks Shrawley!
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Keep me in or keep me out? Either way, it’s a pretty tame attempt at security. All locked upi, but then, I have a key to the back door. Found it in the car park yesterday.
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Nothing like a back door!
Thanks P!
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You have to get out first, before you can keep some arse. Till then, keep trying.
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True.
Thanks A!
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Love the tension you created in the Phoenix character. I look forward to reading more of this world you are creating!!
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This one is quick to anger. 😀
Thanks B!
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His anger and frustration is tangible… gimme a heads up when he breaks out, okay? I’d love to watch – from a distance…
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Gives a new meaning to fire works!
Thanks D!
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i think i know where phoenix is coming from. i felt the same way during a plane ride to california. it was lovely finding myself seated in the middle between two football players. 🙂
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Ooo that would be… uncomfortable. At least you didn’t set the plane on fire or threaten too 😀.
Thanks P
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I liked how the defiance slowly shifts from hope to delusional plans of revenge.
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A true pyromaniac…
Thanks J!
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There’s no caging a true-blood phoenix, the mad fools 🙂
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Here, here!
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Fantasizing about freedom. Plenty of tension. Wonder if freedom was ever achieved. Good Story Tannille!
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Yes, he got out and went ape shit! 😀
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😂
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Oh … they will hold until Ragnarök my dear Fenrir…
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Well they do remind me of the jotunn 😀.
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That’s a punk phoenix right there. Wonderful use of voice to tell this tale.
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Thanks F!
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