PHOTO PROMPT © CEAyr for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
The time ticks by. Keyboard waits to be tapped… Tannille and the muse battle for a story… Again…
MUSE: I got nothing.
TANNILLE: Me too. I keep wanting to add a bomb.
MUSE: Oh I do love a good explosion.
TANNILLE: Too morbid, life for the general population is depressing enough.
MUSE: A virtual reality?
TANNILLE: We’ve been there, done that.
MUSE: Hmm. Music drives crowd mad?
TANNILLE: Like blood coming out of ears?
MUSE: Nice, not morbid at all, that’ll uplift everyone. Moron.
TANNILLE: And a crowd going mad is so feel good. Dipstick.
MUSE: Oh well, at least our banter might cheer some.
Tannille and the muse give up. The photo prompt defeats them.
Tannille & muse make music together!
Interesting conversation again 🙂
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Now that would be interesting considering I am tone death haha.
Thanks A!
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I’d swap that muse for a newer model.
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If only we could by them in the store….
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You can. There are shelves of them, some in parchment, some bound in leather, others in card or paper
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The banter did cheer, but you gave up too easily! 🙂
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100 words were up so we called it quits 😀
Thanks I
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Dear Tanille,
I think perhaps you and your muse might want to seek professional help. 😉 Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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True but then I really would have nothing for Friday Fictioneers when I blank. 😀.
Thanks Rochelle
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Ha ha – this was clever – though I’m sorry the photo defeated both of you. Funny how the imagination works so differently for different writers. 🙂
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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I’m starting to find, now that I have been doing on flash fiction a week I risk recycling ideas or write ideas others have done previously. Also, I’m trying not to write depressing themes given the state of the world.
On the other hand, banter with the muse amuses me lol.
Thanks S
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Sometimes a muse can amuse us and… oh, never mind…
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All in great fun!
Thanks T
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Unless your muse’s name is Terpsichore, you ain’t got nothing. Just the same, I’d say I did enjoy the rumination, Tanille. Brave job and fun to read!
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Good point. An ode to Terpsichore would have been an appropriate choice.
Thanks W!
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Hey, don’t blame me, our doughty leader chooses the photo!
But you made me smile…
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I don’t think it’s the image. I wanted something feel good but I kept seeing the a bomb, then the virus. In the end the muse had fun and I smiled… 😀
PS. I thought about dedicating this one to you…
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Tenille, your dialogue with the muse made me laugh, although I should’ve been more sensitive to your plight. Still, it was funny and now more than ever, we need a good laugh.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Mission accomplished! I actually like when the muse character shows up. She promises fun if nothing else.
Thanks R
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Sometimes you just gotta rely on technique. Yours, in managing the dialogue with the muse, is impeccable. Well done – you had me smiling!
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I enjoy the muse’s appearance. I even smile as I am being abused by her haha.
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The music plays much softer now
and the candles have burned down
I know the sense of loneliness
in the middle of this town.
The chairs sit empty and somehow
the day seems empty too
it was to be a special night
that I had planned for you.
The empty glasses catch the light
and wait to hear you laugh
but the Champaign stands unopened
like some silent cenotaph.
The mirror calls across the room
where it tries to catch my eyes
but what I see is never me
because that mirror lies.
It shows me just what might have been
and I see her watching me
but the candles flicker to their end
and this night will never be.
So I clear away the table
where this night was incomplete
and the evening leaves me standing
In the shadow of defeat.
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Well damn P, your comment is so much better than my crappy story! 😀
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Sometimes you have to give in to those dark impulses. When I try to do something happy, uplifting, my muse says, “Call me when you’re ready to be serious.”
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Normally I have no issue going dark and deep but I am conscious of depressing readers/myself during troubling times. You’re right we don’t always get what we want, creativity is fickle.
Thanks N!
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I get that. I have a depressing book I’m trying to write and avoid at the same time since I’m trying to not be depressed. So, I’ve been editing other works, which is, in a way, more depressing.
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Damn. Sometimes writers really have no choice. If muse permits work on a happy scenes/stories and depressing ones. Switching can help.
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True. I have my fun sci-fi stories, and I have my depressing reality stories. I try to bounce back and forth and find that medium ground.
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I enjoyed the conversation. 🙂 But my muse is touchy, I would never call her names 😀
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She started it lol. All good, every insult is an I love you. 😀
Thanks J
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Honestly, I don’t know if I prefer your battles with your muse or a “supposed real” story!!
These are so great. Honestly.
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To be honest, the muse bickering is pure fun to write it. It’s giving myself the green light to be stupid.
Thanks D, the muse likes her ego stroked. 😀
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The fun shines through and I, for one, love it. And nothing better than a green light! 😉
G’head. Consider her stroked!
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Your muse is altogether too chatty for its own good.
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I know, might be time to bring out a whip. 😀
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Your banter certainly cheered me! Nice one.
Here’s mine!
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Thanks K, we a aimed to please. 😀
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Talking to yourself again? Nice one X
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Seems to becoming a habit 😀.
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Your muse is always entertaining 🙂
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The muse takes a bow.
Thanks L
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Seems like your muse is challenging you… I like how you challenged it back. Well done
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Nothing like a bit of banter. 😀
Thanks M!
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Sometimes all you can go is nowhere with the prompt! I really enjoyed this.
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At least I can fight with myself and be amused….😀
Thanks A
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not that bad. me thinks you should have been in seinfeld coming up with something out of nothing. 🙂
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Strange part is, it only ever happens when I am stumped with these prompts. Haha. Now I just say “hey muse” and start bantering away. I should try it with every day life… 😀
Thanks P
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Your poor Muse is having a tough time of it lately 🙂
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Lazy muse lol…. I think with flash fiction a writer can pump them out and they begin to borrow story elements and lack a freshness.
Thanks D!
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Great piece of emptiness that has prompted a wonderful piece of poetry. Try putting yourself in the picture, the story becomes personal, and anyway the muse is just distraction.
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Understand what you’re saying, I’ve always had a problem with writing mundane stories. 😀
Thanks J!
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Sometimes going nowhere is the place to be … 😉
Well done, you.
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Damn straight! 😀
Thanks N
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🙂
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It’s funny that you weren’t sure where to go with the prompt and you still went somewhere with it! Kudos to you! Also it made me smile to read it, sounds like my own head sometimes. 😀
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It’s always fun when the muse character pops up.
Thanks A
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You weren’t defeated at all, in an inverse way you came up with a very entertaining piece. Well done, Tannille
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You’re right 😀.The muse character is a blessing.
Thanks M!
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Tannille, you and your muse had a jolly good time, it seems.
Think the photo prompt brought the best of both worlds. 🙂 So no defeat here.
https://natashamusing.com/2020/05/a-star-is-born-fridayfictioneers-fridayfotofiction/
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Thanks N!
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https://themysticwagon.wordpress.com/2020/06/10/flash-fiction/
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