Out of her dirty car window, she saw the house demolished. She waited for relief to hit her, making the world ok again. It never came. Instead, her emotions were as flat as the ground before her. Should have stayed away… no, had to make sure.
The house of horrors reduced to nothing more than several diary volumes. Would she be able to move forward? In her mind’s eye, her childhood home still stood tall. Shivers ran through her spine. Don’t go into the second bedroom. It’s location now covered in a mound of gravel. Was it enough to trap and hold the dirty spirit? Where did earthbound ghosts go when their haunting ground become ground zero? Wiped from the land of the living the medium told her. “Blow up the house and you’ll find peace. Rebuild.”
And here she was, builders preparing to rebuild. Sighing, she turned the ignition. The motor roared. No point in staying, her job done. The next tenants spook free. The car crawled along the construction site.
“Didn’t think you would get rid of me did you?”
The spirit of the local serial killer grinned at her from the back seat as they left the lot.
(200 Words)
This week’s photo prompt is provided by wildverbs for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
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What a killer/great last line.
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Literally!
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Some ghosts just can’t be buried!
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Nope, and I don’t think he is bound to the house anymore.
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Oooh and this story just took a ghostly turn! This would be a great beginning to a supernatural tale. I’d love to read more.
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Don’t tempt me lol. The muse wants to blow this story out.
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Let the muse have some fun 😉
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It seems the she has bad memories of the house. But memories are in mind. Demolishing a house can’t get rid of memories. One needs to dull the mind, it seems.
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There are two ways of reading the story, the psychological or the supernatural. I love that flash fiction allows for the writer to be a fence sitter on such tales.
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A haunt is not only a place but a frame of mind, this is so good Tannille!
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Very true. Thanks for the encouragement :).
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Nice and spooky! Who knows what’s buried beneath our feet?
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Creepy when you think about it!
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