PHOTO PROMPT © Ronda Del Boccio for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories using the prompt can be found here.
The light shone bright. Guidance in the night. The fey danced in the trees, offering specs of colours and wonder to the humans clustered around a bonfire telling tales. The adults winked at each other as they toyed with their miniatures. A knowing joke – fairies not real. The youth pointed into the dark with delight seeing more than their elders. They aren’t called the little people for nothing. A shame they grow up, the inner-child wandering lost. The real rib-tickler; we tease and play with the ignorance; move their keys, make their dogs bark. We dance in the dark, beyond mature eyes.
Dear Tanille,
A fairy story for the inner-child. Love it. And the idea of the inner-child wandering and the adult losing his or her innocence is stellar.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle! Something is lost growing up.
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Well penned! 😀
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Thank you!
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Delightful, yet inherently sad, as I guess all fairy stories ultimately are.
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I think you could be right about that…
Thanks Ceayr
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Wonderful light touch with that hint of sadness. I knew someone kept moving my keys! 😉
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I swear they grow legs and walk away!
Thanks Iain!
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I swear they grow legs and walk away!
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There’s a lot that ‘mature’ eyes can’t see!
Interesting tale.
The New Bride – Anita
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It’s sad!
Thanks Anita 😀
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This was a wonderful tale of childhood. Would that we could hold on longer…
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Broke my heart discovering Santa’s true idenity lol
Thanks Dale
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I hear ya…
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We had similar reactions this week, Tannille. Different aspects, but fairies nonetheless. I love your descriptions.
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We seem to do that every now and then! Great minds 😀
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Indeed 🙂
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I believe in fairies. There is the kitchen fairy, who never shows up, the diet fairy, who slaps me on the back of my head daily, and so on.
Great take. Love it!
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When in doubt blame the fairy! I keep an open mind 😀.
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Lovely stuff, just because we don’t believe in them doesn’t mean they don’t exist
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Thats my mind set too… 😀
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it’s true that the older we get, the less we see of the reality before our eyes.
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Agree. The trade for getting older, shame.
Thanks Plaridel!
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This is indicative of many adults’ reluctance to relinquish their child-like attraction to the fantasy world of spirits and urchins. This is well written and caries a reader on a short journey into that intriguing world.
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Thanks Peter!
Would be fun to explore these fairies a little more!
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If only adults still believed, at least we’d be able to see and chase those little key-thieves 🙂
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Would explain soooo much lol.
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Very nicely done.
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Thanks Sandra!
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Innocence and mystery tends to vanish and children grow up and become adults.
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I miss the childlike assumptions…
Thanks Abhijit!
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Beautiful and imaginative, I love the faerie monologue. I personally find that the inner child comes back stronger the older I get.
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The inner child is so much fun. Fantastic, you embrace it!
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Creative and magical story. I also saw fairies in the photo. It’s sad that as we grow out of childhood, our wonder and imagination fades. We must fight to hold on to it.
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I think we’re lucky being writers, we can hang onto “magic” and imagination and file it under fiction.
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That is a very good point. I like that! =)
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What a lovely piece! Wish I was there.
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It would be a great experience.
Thanks Bernadette!
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I would like to still believe in fairies, be still innocent.
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Get in touch with your inner child? 😀
Thanks Patrick!
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Ah, lovely piece of writing!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks Susan!
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The older we get we lose touch of the higher self that sees this magic and we become trapped in our own created limitations. Well, the fairies got their playful ‘revenge’ didn’t they?
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Pisky creatures 😀!
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Lovely story, we do lose that magic as we grow. But there is still one that follows me around, the only explanation I have for socks going missing in the laundry.
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Definitely those pesky creatures!
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To lose the sense of mystery and wonder as we grow up is such a tragedy. A delightful story.
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Thanks Margaret!
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Everything is magic in the eyes of a child.. So well told.
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Lucky little people.
Thanks Violet!
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