PHOTO PROMPT © C.E.Ayr for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
They cleaned out their grandmother’s shed. A hoarder of sorts. She called it collecting. Everything has value, a story.
“You know she’s going to come back and haunt us for messing with her shit.”
“It’s junk, not even charity wants it. Look at this painting, peeling from the backing, just a cheapie.”
Sarah rested the faded image by the wall next to the bin and stepped back. Her sister handed her a glass of wine. They clunked their glasses to honour the matriarch and stared at the rubbish. People started to move within the photograph. The city came alive. A younger version of the grandmother waved from the bridge.
“Better keep this one.”
The last line made me wonder whether they were keeping it out of fear or pleasure
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Or grief…
One of those stories I’m not even sure about. 😀
Thanks N
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Keeping an eye on them from the afterlife. They better watch what else they are throwing out!
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Wonder what else is in the shed… Don’t touch anything 😀.
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Wow!
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That sounds like great wine!
It seems that Paris is magic, even in a photo…
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Perhaps they found the wine in the shed? 😀
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We did go down the same track. I’m a sucker for a live photograph tale.
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Me too! 😀
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Oh, I liked the way you surprised me with this one, Tannille.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks S!
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Magical Paris with younger and smarter grandma!
Not to mess with any of them 🙂
Brilliant, Tannille!
I have a painting story too 🙂 Do read!
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I guess she’ll always have Paris.
Thanks A!
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Was there something magical about the photograph or the wine?
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The million dollar question. 😀
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Seems this painting is filled with ghosts. The populace of a forgotten city?
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I’m not 100% sure if they story is supernatural or psychological (grief can alter the mind). Knowing me, I’d say the image is some kind of portal 😀
Thanks L!
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Dear Tanille,
It sounds like Grandma is happy. Magical story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Wonder what else she stored in that shed 😀. Doubt grandma minds passing over.
Thanks R
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Shit, they thought! Their wine spilled as hands shook, eyes rolled in terror, then eruptions of laughter as they thought ‘she would find a way!’ 🙂
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Oooo Great ending. 😀
Thanks T!
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This is lovely. Cudos on the realistic dialog, too.
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Thanks J!
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“It’s junk,” he said, “It’s useless”
but I had to disagree
It lay there gathering dust for years
and it meant a lot to me.
I’d forgotten that we had it
It was bought so long ago
I really only saw it once
and it worried me because
despite the years it lay there
I never knew what it was.
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We all like our stuff!
Tha nks P
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Wonderful story! That’s definitely a picture you want to keep.
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Maybe they’ll frame the pic and hang it on the wall? 😀
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A friendly ghost story – I like it! Gotta keep that picture.
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Grandma watches 😀. Picture is saved!
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Creepy!
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Thanks M!
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Ooh. Grandma had that special wine.
My friend’s grandmother was the worst hoarder ever. There were rooms in her house that were storage. One couldn’t even walk in there. Now, she seems like a genius or some kind of Nostradamus. “Grandma, I need toilet paper.” “Third door on the left.”
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Toilet paper – her hoarding saves the day haha.
My grandma was a bit like that, she grew up during the depressing and therefore kept pretty much everything and would only give/sell stuff.
Yes that wine may have been in the shed!
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Sounds like a photo out of Harry Potter! They best keep that one…
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Yes! I forgot about the Harry Potter pics. I was thinking of the early 90s kids movie Witches. There was a short scene where a little girl was trapped in painting. It always fascinated and bothered me.
Thanks D!
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😊
Didn’t see Witches. I imagine that would be disturbing!
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Awweee.. I think I’d be that grandmother if I can make it after 50 years. Great perspective!
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Wouldn’t that be fun!
Thanks M
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Ha, yes, keep it! And the wine 🙂
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Just add wine!
Thanks D 😀
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Ha! that was a totally unexpected switch of genre there, Tannille! Nicely done
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Tha nks Lynn!
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this story reminds of the time my friend asked me to help him clean up the storage of an old man prior to the house being sold. while we were sorting the things out, the light bulb started to blink. it scared the hell out of us. 🙂
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Now that’s a story! At least the bulb didn’t blow, that would have been even more creepy.
Thanks P!
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Whao! What was in the wine.
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I think they found it in the shed haha.
Thanks J
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Oooooo Oooooo… the wine talking or reality ? Love that last line… leaves it so mysterious
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All up to interpretation. I can to either way 😀.
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🤣
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I do like where you took this. Magic! I would love to have my grandmother wave at me from a picture. She was so sweet.
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Some on these photos do seem like they capture some kind of energy. It would be great if they offered a glimpse into the after life.
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I love your surprise magical ending! If I didn’t travel and move so much, I would be a hoarder (collector). Everything does have a story! Nicely done, T.
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To avoid hoarding I now take pictures for “story” and toss/donate items. I struggle with collecting things and hoarding because of the memory. Still working on it 😀.
Thanks B!
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I think there was something in that wine! It sounded like they were happy to see a younger version of their grandmother. A version more like themselves, I imagine.
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Yeah maybe they should look at the picture again sober? Maybe younger gran is carrying a bottle of French wine… 😀
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Yeah, they don’t want that crushed in the refuse lorry. Nicely done and quite spooky.
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Gran really would haunt them then!
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Oh I hope they can go visit. I hear Paris is lovely in the Spring!
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Wouldn’t that be a blast!!! No cornona in the picture. 😀
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Absolutely!
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Wow, I’ll have some of what they’re drinking!
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Bottle that stuff up and make a fortune!
Thanks R!
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What is it about old photos that makes us want to break open a bottle of wine and time travel? This was really well-written.
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It’s the only travel we can do at the moment. 😀.
Thanks E!
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