
The vintage carousel shook off her dust. In mint condition, her days in storage made no sense. The city organisers sighed with relief; the ride was a perfect money-spinner for a city going broke.
Tourist bait in place, children climbed onto the assortment of animals as music played. Giggles filled the air as the animals started to move, moulding to the rider, their bodies bopping up and down.
Adults filmed their little darlings from the sidelines. The merry-go-round sped up. The children wrapped their arms around the poles, hanging for dear life. Vision blurred.
The carousel came to a halt.
The children were gone…
Not exactly the ending I was expecting – nor the parents I guess! Well done Tannille.
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The town is about to be sued for damages I’d say.
Thanks K!
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Oh, a child-stealing, self aware carousel. What a unique take. Well done!
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Ah, I like that interpretation… The muse didn’t actually tell me what happened to the children or why… lazy muse ever!
Thanks G!
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Yours and mine, both. 😉
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An automated PIed Piper. Now, that’s progress
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Haha even the Pied Piper has turned to the machines to do his dirty work. I like it.
Thanks N!
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Good one. The phrase “little darlings” alerted me that something was coming. But poof? I wonder if they have one of these for teenagers. 🙂
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Hmm teenagers… it would be a sell out. Bring them back only when they mature. Some would be missing for ever.
Thanks B!
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Nice to see a horror story creeping into my FF selection this week, this feels like it could be the beginning of a much longer piece. A self-aware carousel is fun too – always good to shake up the perspective.
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I think October brings out the horror in people. Many questions are left unanswered in this story. I feel there is much for to be told. 😀
Thanks E!
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Wow thats a shocker of an ending! An alternate universe lurks on that ride! Nice one, Tannille.
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That’s one explanation. I have no idea what happened to the kids. The muse got lazy this week. 😀
Thanks M!
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This ended well. You’d need way more than a 100 words to explain the disappearance anyway I reckon.
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Thanks M…. I’m a bit slow on some replies… whoops… 😀
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No worries.
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it was an ending i didn’t expect. what a twist.
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The ending poses a new question — what happened to the children?
Thanks P!
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Is that the same physics by which socks disappear in the washing machine?
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Oh my, you might be onto something here…
Thanks N!
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I think I understand why the carousel had been put away in storage. Great build up and wonderful twist, T!
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Exactly! I think the carousel has a haunting history.
Thanks B!
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I had a sense of foreboding. That carousel did not appreciate her time in storage. She charged a hefty fee, though!
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She’s spiteful and hungry!
Thanks D
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Oh yes, that’s why it’s in storage, I remember now, it’s possessed… 🙂
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She ain’t happy. 😀
Thanks A
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A new twist on the Pied Piper! I hope no one else tried to use that carousel!
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Only in the past. That’s why the carousel was locked away and storage and forgotten about.
Thanks L!
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Neat idea to make the carousel sentient – and vindictive!
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One way to punish naughty children. 😀
Thanks P
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Dear Tannille,
Chilling little tale. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks R! 😀
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Excellent. Fun how much you can fit into a flash piece!
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That’s the challenge! 100 words, its over before we get into it!
Thanks T
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Yipes, I hope the police aren’t in on this nefarious plot to keep the city from going broke. Poor little kids!
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Not sure what the police make of children disappearing from a carousel. They probably had their funding cut…
Thanks J!
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You’re welcome.
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You got me there, Tannille. Brilliant ending, yet so haunting. You did well in the 100 words.
It’s been awhile, but from memory are you from Western Australia? There’s this awful case of a four year old girl going missing in the middle of the night from the family tent which sounds too much like this. I’m so concerned. Used to live in Geraldton.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Sorry R, I’ve been on hiatus from the blog. Life happened! Yes, I am from WA. The little girl was found in good health (I’m sure you know). It will be interesting to see what the guy’s motives were. He may not have been a pervert but a lonely guy with high psychological issues.
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I tend to think the latter. It will be interesting to see what the court case brings out.
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