
Pearl Alley thrived. The local dress shop catered to the nudists. Jude and Coen stripped off their gear and stored their items in the oversized locker they rented.
“Freedom,” said Coen, slamming the door shut.
The pair walked down the stairs and waved at Anne as she sold a skimpy cotton dress to a naked customer on the first floor.
“Did you see the coin she traded with? It looked old.”
“You have enough old coins — home.”
Jude took her husband’s hand and led him down the alley to the beach. Hitting the water, their legs turned into tails. They swam home.
~*~
Note:
This week’s story stars two characters from the novel I have been working on and therefore set in The ImmorTales World. I figure I’ve put these two through enough hell and they deserve a break. Darkest story I’ve ever written and coming from me that says a lot.
Somehow, I think we haven’t heard that last of that coin. I loved the idea of a dress shop for nudists
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I suspect you’re right.
Dress shop for nudist seems like an oxymoron.
Thanks, N.
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Handy having somewhere to store your gear when you get your tail out. Novel approach, Tanille. 🙂
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Exactly. Quite a lucrative business.
Thanks, S.
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I didn’t see that one coming.
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One twisty tale… er tail 😀.
Thanks, J.
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Now there is a worthy twist. Would love to see the old coin collection he has.
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Me too. It would be worth a mint. 😀
Thanks, L.
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You’re welcome, T.
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Intriguing twist, makes me want to know more about them.
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Thanks Iain, I’m sure they will return. 😀
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I don’t care much to look at nudists, but I WOULD like to see those legs turn into tails 🙂
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It would hard not to stare!
Thanks, L.
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Dear Tanille,
I can see where clothing would get in the way of your legs turning into a tail. Clever and imaginative tale.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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They don’t like clothes much. And they are useless for such creatures. 😀
Thanks, R.
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Such a creative twisty story. Well done!
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Thanks, C!
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i don’t know, but somehow i feel like they’re aliens living among us.
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I always wondered if mythological creatures and aliens were basically the same with different names.
Thanks, P.
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Great tale. I love the ending. It fits so perfect.
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Thanks, A! 😀
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An amusing tail, sorry, tale! Nice one Tannille.
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The choice of two tales… er tails.
Thanks, K.
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And I’m left wondering where she was going to stash her coin without any pockets. 😊
Nice tale, I mean tail.
Tracey
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Some of the creatures carry crossbody bags, mini backpacks, or pouches tied to their bodies. But yes, it would be annoying for them to have not have something to store small objects. 😀
Thanks, T.
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Good to know
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Fun story!
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It was also fun to write 😀.
Thanks, D.
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Oh, the naturalness of nakedness. Interesting story, T. One to ponder. Enjoyed the backstory, as well.
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Humans are the only creatures with issues about nudity. We, as a collective, sexualised skin and created taboos. That being said, I shall keep my clothes on. 😀
Thanks, B.
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Me too. 🙂
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Is that what Gym Class Heroes were singing about when they said, “We have to take our clothes off to have a good time”? An intriguing way to get people into the ImmorTales. They come for the nudity and stay for the tales or tails.
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I don’t know, there was this one episode of “Buffy” where the swim team turned into water creatures. So, I figured maybe there is something about American gym class?
Nudity sells. All about marketing!
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Thanks, N.
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Didn’t see the ending coming! I’ve never read fantasy meeting a story about nudists before! Was super fun to read!
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I never really thought of my characters as nudist before, but it makes sense! 😀
Thanks, OP.
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This is wild Tannille and I love it 😍
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Thanks, P!
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I love this, great twist in the end. What interesting mythical creatures, walking among us.
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A dress shop for nudes is just perfect, intriguing tale, there’s a lot more to it I think .
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Love the dress shop for nudists, its a fun concept, and I suspect there’s a lot more to discover in this world
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A dress shop for nudists! Now that’s quirky! Nicely done, T 🙂
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