
The store accumulated junk. Items the fairies stole. Silly items to mess with humans. To make the humans think they lost their minds. A fairy sport. They say you should never do deals with fairies or witches.
A newspaper sat next to the till. The disappearance of a local child dominated headlines.
Ellie Watson
Age: 7
Hair: red
Eyes: blue
The shopkeeper straightened up the painting on the wall. A quaint picture of a farmhouse. On close inspection, a little girl with hair like embers stood by the water’s edge.
Ellie never left the town.
She was hiding in plain sight.
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Note:
This week’s story was inspired by a scene from “The Witches” (1990), an adaptation of Roald Dahl‘s classic “The Witches”. Erica’s story entered my psyche as a kid — sad, haunting and fascinating. This flash fiction story is a part of the Fudged Up Fairy Tales series (click here).
A delightful horror piece. I wonder why we both saw horror in this scene
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Because we need psychological heIp? 😀. I blew the picture up looking for any junk that might tigger. My muse is a bit wacky. And proud of it.
Thanks N
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Dear Tanille,
That was quite the story. I can see why this picture prompted horror. It was my feeling when I walked into that thrift store. 😉 You could lose a body in all of that.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It looks like a charity store. It all looks like junk. Was the store dusty?
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I’m trying to get a jump start on stories this week lol…a change from trying to read them all a day before it closes!
I love this story, it’s spooky but so clever. A shop full of things stolen by fairies. This gives me ideas for adventures with Aurora, my fairy character… nicely done!
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Getting a head start is the key.
Must admit I never thought about what fairies do with the items they steal from humans before. The idea of being tapped inside a painting is creepy.
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It’s creepy, but a very clever concept.
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OK, Ellie, what did you or your parents do to bring on the wrath of the fairies? Never mess with a fairy or witch… Nice one.
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Maybe Ellie wanted to get away? I would like to know the back story.
Thanks T
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The back story is interesting – one thing about these 100 word micro-stories is that everyone can create their own backstory, personalizing those scant 100 words.
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Very true. The magic of a 100 word story!
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I marvelled at your story, you told it well
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Thanks M!
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Delightfully different, Tanille.
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Thanks K
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A tale of the paranormal, to make you jump.
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And never look at paintings again!
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Oh, poor little girl! I’m thinking we’re going to see lots of spooky stories this week 🙂
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Bring them on! It’s the month to be spooked…
Thanks L
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A stroy to scare any child!
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And grown-ups! 😀
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Poor little girl. Children always pay the price for the foibles of adults 😦
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They do. And other times children find trouble own their own. Either way is sad.
Thanks L
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You’re welcome, T.
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Well told!
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Thanks D!
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Excellent take on the prompt! Now I will look deep inside pictures .
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There is a lot in this picture prompt. I didn’t know where to start. Loads of fun and toys for The Muse to play with.
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excellent!
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Thanks A!
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it mus be her indeed. i guess we tend to believe what we wanted to believe. 🙂
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That is very true.
Thanks P
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Great story! I love that sort of creepy story that mixes magic and real life together. Poor Ellie though.
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I find creepy stories linger longer than straight horror or mystery stories.
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Did the fairires steal her into the picture?
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Yep. Lured her away. 😀
Thanks C
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Oh dear, i thought they were supposed to be nice.
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Your story is a very creative take on the prompt photo, Tannille, Well conceived. 🙂
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Thanks B! I had fun with this one. 😀
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🙂
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Oh I remember that scene from The Witches! Well done
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The scene was out of tone next to the rest of the movie.
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Yes, it was quite chilling! As was this! Well done 👏
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Dang those fairies. Always gaslighting folks.
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Mean little fudgers!
Thanks N!
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A very good twist here, I enjoyed it immensely. Well done. I wonder if the fairies have got my headphones, I’ve been searching for them for weeks …
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I wouldn’t put it past the fairies. Your headphones are with my keys. 😀
Thanks H!
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