
Ben and Beth were on the run, fleeing from monsters. They found the perfect place to hide in the bush with no electricity. The couple brought along with them some old fashion fun; guitars, cross-word puzzles and books. The sound of silence was comforting.
“Do you hear that?”
“No.”
“Isn’t it grand?”
Ben nodded as he and Beth sat down on their fold-up chairs and sighed. Ben opened an esky and tossed a can to his wife. In unison, they cracked open their drinks. The cold beverages washed away their reality for five minutes.
“Mum, when’s dinner?”
Their darling monsters found them. Peace over.
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Note:
I noticed after posting I have another story on this blog called “Little Monsters”. I think the stories might be related? Click here.
As a random side note — this blog just turned four! Many more posts to come.
Sweet but temporary peace
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Thanks N!
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Dear Tanille,
I used to have a T-shirt that said, “I’m the Mom. Don’t tell anyone you saw me.” Yeah, that never worked. 😉 Love the build of tension and the misdirect.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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What a great T-shirt! Unfortunately, little darlings always sniff their mothers out. Nice try 😀.
Thanks R!
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You can run, but you can’t hide. And if the little monsters are your responsibility, that respite is brief…
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I’m sure some times the little monsters are tamed and offer sheer enjoyment. Everyone needs a break sometime.
Thanks T
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Enjoy it while you can. But I bet you wouldn’t want it any other way!
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They aren’t small forever. Enjoy the littles while you can. 😀
Thanks K
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Yes, we have had this experience many times!! 🙂
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They know!!! Little stalkers in the making… 😀
Thanks I
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Yup. About half-an-hour after you put them all to bed. . . . .
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They know… how do you have fun without them. 😀
Thanks L
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Nice “twist”, T. Happy 4th Blogiversary!
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Thanks L! 😀
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This made laugh! Thanks for the delightful twist.
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Thanks A! 😀
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Congrats to you and the Muse on the blog birthday. 🙂
A fun, relatable story. The day will come when the silence will remain. But that’s another story, altogether. 🙂 Well done, T.
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They aren’t small forever. Some can’t handle the silence when there is an empty nest.
Thanks B!
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🙂
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LOL! Love it very much.
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Thanks C! 😀
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Children and peace don’t mix lol. Happy 4th, T.
~ Dora
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Embrace the chaos! 😀
Thanks D
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Happy 4th anniversary 🙂 Nice misdirect.
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Thanks NTW!
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A very cute story. I loved the misdirect!
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Ha ha – lovely twist! Happy blogaversary 🙂
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Thanks D! 😀
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There is no escape from those little monsters. Nice twist, T.
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Nope, they have radars. No GPS needed.
Thanks N.
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Great story and reality, Tannille even when the little darlings aren’t that small. We also have three dogs so even when I have the house to myself, they’re here and I’m on ball throwing duty. I was probably go crazy after only 30 minutes completely on my own at home although I crave it, especially when they’re all interrupting me while I’m trying to write!
Congratulations on your 4th Blogversary!
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Pets and children. Demanding and loving. How dare you stop tossing that ball. Interruptions while writing are usually cute. Makes it all so much harder.
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but of course, i love the twist in the end. well done. 🙂
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Thanks P!
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We only go camping because the kids love it, honestly. let them cook their own bean stew, and perhaps they will remember what it takes to look after monsters.
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A belated thank you for your comment J! 😀
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That’s a cute story with a good twist at the end. Camping is our preferred way to have a holiday, even more fun with the kids. Nicely done. 😉
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A belated thanks for your comment, F. I have been MIA trying to write a novel and juggling life. 😀
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You’re welcome Tannille.
That will ve me next year whenI start the rewrite of my trilogy. I know I can make it a better read, nearly 10 years since being published. And that life juggling…it’s like a trapeze eh 🙂
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A half a can is about the time limit, I think. Usually one sip is sufficient to bring the little ones around … 😉
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A belated, thanks N!
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