PHOTO PROMPT © Ceayr for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
Note: Apologies for missing last week’s story. I opened my laptop to write. Alas, she is dead. My workflow is disrupted, but I am fortunate to have back-up devices while my precious is being repaired. This is why I pay for Dropbox (consider it insurance) or I’d be using a four letter word that starts with ‘F’ and ends in ‘K’!
“Make a wish.”
Anna sat in her wheelchair watching her great-grand daughters discover the family’s wishing well. Generations played the same game. For some the well served and others… it all depended on which way the coin fell. Life’s gamble. A legend told to spook the young ones.
Anna’s bones ached as she leaned forward.
STOP! The word never left her head.
A coin hit the water like a bullet. Fate sealed. The girls squealed with delight. A tear traveled down Anna’s face and into the abyss. She’d outlived them all; siblings, husband, children.
Her childhood wish – to live forever.
Living forever must be a lonely business
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It’s never been a dream of mine.
Thanks N!
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Dear Tanille,
I echo Neil. Living forever doesn’t seem to be all it’s cracked up to be. I hope your precious is back up and running soon. The only thing worse than being without a computer is having your car in the shop.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Not to mention these companies like to claim “it’s not covered under warranty”. I’m still waiting. Fingers crossed.
Thanks R!
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Not a wish of mine. If I can’t have my twenty’s and thirty’s back then take me while I am still young enough to appreciate how easy I am getting off….
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Totally agree with you. Who knows maybe on the other side we are forever young!
Thanks V!
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Sensitively rendered. Who indeed would want to live forever once familiar with the cycle to be played out.
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I think when we’re young these things sound cool. I remember being a kid and my peers saying they wished to live to 100 years. I never got it!
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An eternity of watching others die sounds ghastly.
There can be only one.
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Horrifying really. Life should be quality not quantity.
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Careful what you wish for…Nicely told.
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Thanks SFF!
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The power of wishes is very strong.
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At the very least wishes are are psychological mind set, if not asking the universe / God.
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We must be careful for what we wish… some wishes do come true.
Nice story.
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The moral of the story…
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I kind of think that would be a curse after a while. My laptop died last week too. Must be in the air.
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Yes huge curse!
I’ve been using MacBooks for a decade and never needed a repair. This MacBook is 14 months old. I expect a shitfight coming up. Hope your laptop gets fixed/replaced, I feel your pain.
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Be careful what you wish for. Good work, hope the laptop is repaired!
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This is Australia, everything goes slow – no sign on the MacBook, stuck with Windows for a while. 😊.
Thanks I.
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Definitely not a wish to wish for! Wonderfully written, T.
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In school my peers wanted to live to be 100. Even at the under 10 age my response was good god why. 😀
Thanks D!
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Haha! I’m not saying it can’t be cool if you’re healthy… But otherwise? No way, José
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You’ve constructed this story very well. It would be a grim business to outlive even one of your children. I hope Anna doesn’t outlive any of her grandchildren (yes, I know, the wish was to live for ever but nobody does that…!)
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I’ve known the odd elderly who buried their older children from old age related illnesses. Didn’t seem right. Can’t imagine the pain of losing children young or older.
Thanks P!
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Echoing Rochelle–I just got my car back after 2 1/2 weeks of it being in the shop. Ugh. Having to drive Terry’s old clunker is no joy, and I’ll never understand why he loves his old clunkers and only lets go of them when they fall off the chassis 🙂
Anyway, I think this is a most thought-provoking story. I wouldn’t want to live forever, either, if it had to be as a old, old woman with aching bones. Not fun at all.
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2 1/2 weeks – oh no! I heard there is world car part shortage, I’m sure that wouldn’t help. It’s amusing how attached we get to particular objects. I have access to iPads and other laptops but I want my main work machine.
Living forever sounds good in theory. Might be ok if our bodies didn’t let us down.
Thanks L!
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Oooh! Good one! That last line killed me. Excellent writing!
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I bet Anna wished it killed her too. 😊
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Very well constructed.
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Thanks D!
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A wish that seemed a good idea at the time.
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She should have wished for forever young…
Thanks K
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Living forever sounds great on the surface, but eventually I think it just means living alone. Great writing!
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And the body will betray…
Thanks R
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So she was granted longevity. Blessing or curse?
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I’d say for a long time a blessing but turned into a curse, especially when her body started to fail.
Thanks Jo
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A magical fountain pool that delivers every wish! Wonder what the granddaughter wished?
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I imagine (aka if I had more words) one of the grandchildren would wish for something that give Anna a release.
Thanks A
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I grant your wish to complete the story. Now all you have to do is write the rest! 🧚🏽♀️
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Well done, oops, no pun intended.
It would be a wish of the young, to live forever. Your story shows this hard learned wisdom. I’m sure there’s a point too where one wouldn’t wish to be forever young.
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There is a price for everything.
Thanks D
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Living forever would be a prison sentence, especially if ill or incapacitated in any way. You conveyed this well
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Agreed. Thankfully nothing lasts forever.
Thanks M
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Among those tarnished coins a prewar penny lies hidden. There are several, one for each visit I made to the family home. A collection of wishes that never came to fruition. Like praying, you make the effort and blame fate when your please go unanswered. Perhaps the well grew tired before I was born.
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Well done P!
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Love your story! Always be careful what you wish for xxx
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A lesson I think most learn the hard way.
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Living forever, maybe it’s a good thing. Party like there’s no tomorrow. Well done.
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Forever young (immortality) might be a good thing (party on), living forever with an old body would be torturous.
Thanks S
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Nice blog!
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Thank you very much S!
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My pleasure, Tannile! 💖
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