The city stood still. A glitch in time. Cars froze on the road. Pedestrians, statues in mid-walking poses. The sound of water from the fountain echoed throughout the concrete jungle. Lights danced on the liquid mirror and reflected against the gigantic flower centrepiece. Its petals opened in slow motion. Two aliens looked around in awe.
“Nice landing.”
The second alien puked in response. Chunks splashed.
“Come, before the freeze wears off.”
The green alien washed his mouth and followed his mate. They teleported and stood in front of one of the statues.
“What are they doing?”
“It’s a primitive action called walking. Now collect the earthlings DNA and we’re out of here.”
“Are you sure this one is male?”
“One way to find out.”
PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
Ominous last line
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Lucky for readers I ran out of words or it would have been really nasty. 😀
Thanks N
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I hope they clone an improved model of human.
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They’ll keep trying until they get it right, there is a lot to fix. Might be a while.
Thanks I
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“Chunks splashed”
Glorious 😀
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Yeah don’t drink out of that fountain. 😀
Thanks Mr
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Dear Tanille,
I cringed at the chunks. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Nasty stuff… 😀
Thanks R
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Aliens may be here anytime to collect DNA!
Some believe they are already around!
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I cringe at the thought, yet facinated at the same time.
Thanks A
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Really enjoyed this, Tannille, and good to have a bit of humour as lock down continues. My favourite line was: “It’s a primitive action called walking.”
I tried to ignore the “chunks”.
Best wishes & stay safe (even from aliens),
Rowena
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So much in the world to already sigh about, I think people need humour more than ever. I have a feeling the aliens are too lazy to walk, they might be more human than imagined.
Thanks R (and I’m not sure any of us are safe from Aliens) 😀
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Some of us could well be aliens. Well, at least aliens of sorts!
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Intriguing last line – and vomit has never been so poetic, lol
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This chunks seems to be a popular line. 😀
Thanks A
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Such a simplistic view of gender your aliens hold! They must both be male…
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I wondered if anyone would pick up on that 😀. I think the aliens may have been asexual but I didn’t look…
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Thanks P!
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Ha ha – I really enjoyed that! Imaginative take on the photo prompt, Tannille.
Susan A Eames at
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Thanks S. They may be back for more DNA!
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Tannille, I wonder if your aliens know Zing and Zang :). Cute story, I enjoyed it.
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That crossed my mind! Zing and Zang probably shared everything they knew.
Thanks L!
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This could actually happen – nothing surprises me these days!
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Keep an open mind to everything. Fact is stranger than fiction.
Thanks K
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I think this has happened… wonder when they are sending the clones back.
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Nothing would shock me. 😀
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Fun story.
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Thanks A!
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Must’ve been quite a flight and landing – don’t they check for those who might have motion sickness? This was great fun, Tannille. Why they want Human DNA is beyond me – unless they want to make improvements…
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I guess even aliens drove bombs (what we call old cars in Oz? 😀. Not sure why they want DNA… Perhaps humans blow themselves up?
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Endless possibilities… 😉
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I like the idea of a species that communicates via vomit. Gross.
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Didn’t think of it like that but it would be a unique form of communication lol.
Thanks N
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I usually see things from the point of view of the bizarre.
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Me too!
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The one alien needs a new job. Throwing up chunks is never good. Creative story, T!
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Or they need a new smoother model space craft 😀.
Thanks B
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Funny idea that aliens suffer travel sickness! That doesn’t come up much in the movies!
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Hollywood seems to skip over bodily functions. I think the aliens are more human than they know. 😀
Thanks T!
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I dearly hope the specimen statue didn’t have orange hair 😉
I hope they send back some vastly improved versions.
Wonderfully imaginative and well-told. (I am glad you ran out of words :D) )
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Urk, ” Chunks splashed” 🙂
He or she is going to be in a bit of a compromising position when the freeze wears off. Fun!
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Absolutely!
Thanks D
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males are sensitive to touch even when frozen. be careful. they come alive and rise to the occasion. 🙂
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The aliens might be in for a shock then 😀.
Thanks P!
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I had to smile at this story, and then again at Plaridel’s answer
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This story may have turned x-rated… 😀
Thanks M!
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Chunks, eh? Well, there is something comforting about knowing that aliens get motion sickness, too … 😉
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More human than we know. 😀
Thanks N!
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🙂 You’re welcome. It was a fun one!
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A glimpse into the lives of some interesting characters, motion sickness and all!
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I imagine they are quite the characters. 😀
Thanks E!
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I’m now imaging the poor guy who finds his pants around his ankles and starts babbling about aliens. 🙂 Nice story.
-David
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I think that’s a logical conclusion lol.
Thanks D!
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