
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
“Mummy there’s a man in the window.”
“It’s your imagination sweetie. Remember what your doctor said.”
Violet shrugged and stretched. The legs on the ladder vivid in her view. The medication promised to fix that. She turned her attention to her breakfast. Several bites and pills later, she glanced at the window – empty. Violet sighed with relief and went about her day without incident.
The moon shone bright into Violet’s room. She woke with dry mouth and tip-toed to the kitchen for water. The ladder rested against the window. Her heart pounded and she sprinted into her mother’s room. Two naked bodies, tangled between the sheets and muffed giggles ignored her. The curtains flapped with the wind against the the top of the ladder.
Mama said there’ll be days like this…
I guess a gal’s gotta do…
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Haha. If only there were more words. Perhaps she should give mother the pills.
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Mary had a daughter? she never told me
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Haha great dirty minds think alike
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I hope the mother’s not medicating the daughter to hide her affair. This kind of scares me.
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Mummy dearest isn’t the best parent.
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😀 😀 😀
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I enjoyed this a lot. Nicely done.
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Thanks Mr B!
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Plays mind games by telling lies to her daughter.
Poor daughter. Now, with her fragile state off mind, her trust has been shattered.
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Some people should never be parents. Luckily kids tend to bounce back (although if repeated some are damaged).
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Dear Tannille,
This sounds like the beginning of a horror movie. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rpchelle
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If only I had more words. I’d like to believe Violet turns the tables. 😀
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Great, unexpected twist, Tannille. Well done!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks S!
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Goodness me mother! Shocking behaviour 😉
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I know, appalling. I have a feeling Violet gains the upper hand when she gets older.
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Bad Mummy!!
It ain’t easy being a single mother… a woman’s gotta do what she’s gotta do…
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Mummy needs a spanking haha.
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And I think she got it already.
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I really feel bad for the little Violet. An amazingly horrific twist in the end.
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I think Violet becomes a handful and plays the same sort of tricks on Mummy Dearest.
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brilliant ;0
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Thanks T
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My pleasure. 😄
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Poor little dear! I’m angry at this mother. One thing to lie. A whole other thing to blame the child for what the mother KNOWS the child had seen. Oy!
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Child abuse. Some people should never be parents. Oh well Violet grows up to be a hell raiser for her mother. 😀
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Yeah, some people should DEFINITELY not be parents!
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Good twist. Great take on the photo.
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Thanks T!
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Great take, secrets shenanigans form Mums room, although i’m not sure dosing her child with drugs is the best way to continue her tryst in secret…
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Not the best mother. Karma has a way of biting.
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Mummy’s going to live to regret this methinks!
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That would be my guess.
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Mummy’s using Mummy’s little helpers to help herself. Great take.
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Mummy might need a dose of her own medicine.
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Well writen, but not a very nice mum, drugging her daughter so she can canoodle in peace.
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I wonder where daddy is.
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Was mama drugging her daughter so she and the uh, painter, could have a little slap and tickle? Despicable, if so.
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That’s pretty much it. I remember when I was a small child in the 80s there was a fad of mothers giving children cough medicine before bed so the adults could have peace. I recall being lined up with other kids and Mum refusing to let me be drugged. Of course at the time I felt left out haha.
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Goodness. My kids were all born in the 70’s, and I know moms who put sugar or honey on their pacifiers to get them to sleep. I thought that was setting them up for bad habits later, and never did it. Cough medicine? No way!
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Very well written, Tannille. I enjoyed your craft even as I deplored the content. As so many have said, that’s a woman who shouldn’t be a parent. I regret to say, though, that despite this, I sniggered…
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To me it’s equal parts of terrifying and funny. If I were to write more the theme would be what goes around comes around. 😀
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Nasty, playing into her daughter’s illness to hide her shenanigans.
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Very nasty. People tend to forget kids grow up.
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he must be romeo climbing up the ladder, her mom playing juliet later. 🙂
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You got it! Only that’s a polite way of putting it. 😀
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The birds and the bee’s come to mind.
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Hmm that talk will be coming.
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This gave me chills. One day, mommy dearest might be sorry. Very creative and nicely written!
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Karma’s a bitch as they say. I believe Violet becomes a handful. Still how awful for a child.
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Certainly an awful experience for a child! =(
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Window cleaners get all the fun. Will Violet ever trust her mother again, and will she stop the useless medication, or will she take this as a lesson in how to lie.
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If I were to write more, Violet would become a terror. Perhaps drug her mother and play tricks.
Thanks J
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“I was just showing the painter how to fold a fitted sheet …”
If Hitchcock had done a comedy sketch, this would have been it!
Five out of five naughty-naughties.
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Haha I can see this. Brilliant!
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Can’t “unsee” it, either. 😀
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Reminded me of the scene in The Sixth Sense…very scary.
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Absolutely, ghost or man very creepy.
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Wicked Mummy !
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She needs a dose of her own medicine!
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Scandalous!
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