
Update:
Life hit in fall swing. Never enough hours in the day, or rather never enough energy to do every intention (like a weekly flash fiction). I completed another physio block (that’s always fun) and my real-life writers’ group switched to Zoom because wearing a mask is… yeah… we ALL know. Last month, I signed up for YouTuber Sarra Cannon’s ‘Publish and Thrive’ course. The good news is I’m learning a lot, and the bad… well I have to rework my novel/series with marketing in mind. The new direction is exciting and more true to the original conception. Still need to wonder some more.
Anyway, The Muse decided to come out and play hijack this week’s story.
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The mind is like a house; sometimes the rooms are empty and sometimes full —
“Hey, I said go with the reverse Hansel and Gretel. Have H and G lure a helpless old lady. New genre: wicked cannibalistic kids. Elder abuse is never topical.”
“Seriously Muse, you want to start a movement? We only have 100 words!”
The muse ignores her host and continues, “Themes of mental illness and isolation. A tale for the 21st century.”
“Ah huh, and I suppose the moral of the story is don’t go door knocking during a pandemic? Keep the greys safe?”
“No, Dummy. Use contraception.”
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Note: Details on the ‘Hansel and Gretel’ fairytale can be found here.
Now there’s a great moral for a fairy story!
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The Muse thought so. 😀
Thanks N
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Haha, thats a fun use of the prompt! Well done.
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Sometimes it’s hard to convey a story within 100 words.
Thanks M!
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No kidding! I always want to write several hundred words for these prompts and have rein myself back to just the bare bones of a story. Great for honing skills though.
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Makes sense.
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Thanks D!
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But if there are no children left, will the fairy tales die with them?
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Good point. People tend to ignore wisdom anyway. For example Crime doesn’t pay — there are still criminals. 😀
Thanks I
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Hahaha! Love when I end with a snort of laughter.
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Yep, put the beverage down first! The Muse wont be held responsible for damaged key boards. 😀
Thanks D!
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Dear Tannille,
I’ll admit to chuckling at the end. 😉 Good to see you back.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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And to think, I was asn’t sure how I was going to pull a story off this week. 😀
Thanks R!
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You made it!
Don’t fight the muse. These days one can start a movement with 144 characters. Xero’s currently making a case for contraception.
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You remember that. Next time, you will have mini me and daughter in heat = a dozen puppies.
Thanks N!
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Where’s that suicide emoji?
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They took the gun away but we still have 🔪.
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Great use of the prompt.
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Thanks S!
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what a twist at the end. totally unexpected like somebody knocking on my door right now. 🙂
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Turn out the lights and pretend not to be home. 😀
Thanks P
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Twisted and spinning. Clever approach. Nice.
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Thanks B! 😀
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Ha, Hansel and Gretel-based was my first thought too 🙂
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Great minds.
Thanks A
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That’s an interesting muse you’ve got. Great voices in this, and I like the twist at the end.
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She has quite the attitude! 😀
Thanks M!
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An interesting twist on a well-known classic.
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I do love fairytales. 😀
Thanks H!
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Love the last line. Well, not for my kids, you know, but the thought has real merit.
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Any dysfunctional person can breed, that’s the problem. Planning is good. 😀
Thanks S!
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