
PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Other stories featuring the prompt can be found here.
The children turned out the light and waited under their covers, their shoes ready. Peter Pan always came… when good and ready. His time.
Tap-tap. John opened the window as Michael and Wendy grabbed their shoes.
“This is for the psycho pirate —”
Peter dodged the projectiles.
“Getting us kidnapped. Nearly blown up, eaten by a crocodile.”
Smack. Peter took the hint and left.
The Darling shoes dangled on a pole outside their window. Their parents were going to go ape. Shoes didn’t grow on trees any more than horses became wishes.
Only one option — fairy dust. John sprinkled himself and ran towards the window.
“Happy thoughts, John! Happy thoughts —”
Clever and fun!
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Happy thoughts! 😀
Thanks B
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I’m sure John made it. I’m less sure that he didn’t then transform into Peter
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Ah, so that’s Peter’s shadow? 😀
Thanks N!
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Oh John NO! I liked how the sudden realisation came with a thump. Children’s imaginations sometimes can go too far.
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The ending could “fly” either way.
Yes, sometimes children’s (and adult’s) imagination can go too far. There is a kid in us all.
Thanks J!
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This ends well if he used the right dust. So much of that stuff is fake. 🙂 Well done.
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Hopefully Wendy didn’t mislabel the salt. 😀
Thanks B
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You’re welcome.
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i have a feeling it didn’t go as planned. 😦
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It could go either way — 50/50.
Thanks P
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Oh dear – I fear the ending was not good. Lovely original take on the prompt – I love the idea of Peter Pan being met with a hail of boots!
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I heard a theory recently — Peter Pan isn’t a good guy, he’s death and Neverland is Hell. Adult logic I think. 😀
Thanks P!
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This is brilliant. And I love the title.
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Must admit “Darling Shoes” tickled my fancy. 😀
Thanks G
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Dear Tanille,
Fun spin on an old story. Happy thoughts.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Happy thoughts. Now if only I could fly.
Thanks R!
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Love this! Happy thoughts will hopefully conquer all.
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And a fairy is born 😀.
Thanks A!
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Oh yikes! I hope that fairy dust was the real deal and his thoughts are happy enough 🙂
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At least he would go splat with a smile on his face…
Thanks A!
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Very creative take, T. I liked that a lot. I laughed at Peter dodging projectiles and cringed when John went for the window.
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All a few sentences apart!
Yeah, I hope the fairy dust is the real deal. I did hear a theory that Peter Pan is an angel of death and the lost boys are lost souls.
Thanks N!
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I thought the Lost Boys were vampires.
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Oh yeah… classic!
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Love this. Whimsical and entertaining, with a touch of danger to spice it up. John – stay away from the window.
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An interesting take on the tale 🙂
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Thanks L!
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