
The old sea-themed restaurant, Sharks, sits on the docks. Its mascot hangs from the ceiling and its walls are covered with signs travellers “donated” from all over the world.
The smell of fish, beer, and salt fights for nostril dominance.
Out the back, the daily catch is being prepared.
Behind a hidden panel is a secret entrance. The space is full of discarded clothes and accessories. A place for the nudes to dress. Nearby, a tunnel of stairs leads to the ocean below. The tritons come and go as they please. Humans are none the wiser. Catering to the sea creatures keeps Sharks afloat.
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Notes
I sat and pondered with this prompt image for a while, pesky 100 words. Ultimately, I expanded on The ImmorTales world (my novel world). The mer couple, Coen and Jude were cut but this is their playground. The pair feature in other flash fiction —
Blender Magic
The Flip Off
The Only Way is Nude
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Who doesn’t love a secret door?
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In this case those who can’t hold their breath. 😀.
Thanks, N.
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Great take on the prompt, Tanille.
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Thanks, S!
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You’ve created a great ambiance here, T. I can almost smell it for better or worse.
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I like the fantastical spin you put on this otherwise ordinary looking place.
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Must admit, I wouldn’t mind exploring more.
Thanks, L 😀
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You’re welcome.
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I think I’d like to see a triton, naked or not 🙂
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Me too. But maybe not when I’m in the water. 😀.
Thanks, L.
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Dear Tannille,
You’ve captured the atmosphere and made us feel it. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, R. 😀
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Love this original take, T. Nicely done.
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Thanks, D 😀!
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Pleasure!
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A splendid, atmospheric take on the prompt! What a wonderful imagination you have.
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Thanks, A. I found this prompt quite challenging. 😀
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I enjoyed how the idea of a secret world can co-exists among us hapless humans. I suspect we better not upset them.
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Like human dealing with tritons is a bit hit and miss.
Thanks, J.
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Mermaids are on my mind today also. I live in and on the water so that’s no surprise on any given day. Good story. I suspect some of the nudes never need their clothes again.
Tracey
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Great minds! I hate to imagine the smell of all those damp clothes. 😀
Thanks, T
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Ooo yuck
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I wasn’t sure what to expect when I read the title – and I wasn’t disappointed! Nice one.
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“Nudes” always bait them in.
Thanks, K.
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Great atmosphere created 🙌
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Thanks, A! 😀
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Great twist. I love the secret entrance, and the idea that it’s the tritons who keep the restaurant ‘afloat’. Terrific.
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Must admit I am happy for “Sharks” to be added to my story world.
Thanks, M
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